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Dissertations: Introductions & Conclusions

Introductions

The introduction of a dissertation conveys the purpose and significance of a research study. It introduces readers to the topic of the research and helps them to understand how and why the study was conducted. It also presents an overview of the dissertation.

In writing the introduction to our dissertation, we could explain the topic / issue we would like to research and why this topic is important. We could also state clearly how we intend to research this topic and why our chosen method of investigation is the most appropriate way to research this topic.  We could try to include these features in our introduction so that readers understand the function of each point in our introduction.

 

  • In this dissertation, I will argue that...
  • This dissertation will explore the following questions...
  • The purpose of this dissertation is to...
  • The following is a brief overview of...
  • It is widely believed that...
  • However, there is growing evidence to suggest that...
  • This dissertation will challenge the conventional wisdom that...
  • The findings of this study have important implications for...
  • The purpose of this dissertation is to examine /analyse /investigate...
  • This study seeks to explore the impact/effect of...
  • Over the past [time period], numerous studies have focused on...
  • The significance/importance of [this topic] lies in...
Example 1

This research seeks to make a contribution to knowledge through foregrounding the participation of children's centre practitioners in empirical research and theorising. Lansdown (2006) argues that those working with the youngest of children have, overall, been less proactive in the participation debates and theoretical discussions than practitioners working with older children, although clearly many early years practitioners do promote participatory practices with children. Through designing and conducting participatory action research projects with children and their parents, I, as a practitioner working with other practitioners, have sought to address this disparity through our own practice, reflection and theorising.

 

Example 2

This introductory chapter explains overuse injury. It addresses overuse injury causal mechanisms and stages because psychological factors are linked to injury via the mechanisms and stages. The harms of overuse injury are then presented in terms of prevalence and severity, followed by a summary of what little is known about the psychological antecedents of overuse injury. Given the paucity of overuse injury research, and research specific to psychological factors of overuse injury, a rationale for employing the social identity approach as a theoretical framework for the study of overuse injury is given. Finally, the notion that mental toughness plays a role with overuse injury within the social identity framework is examined.

 

Example 3

Through working with many different midwives in different areas, this researcher realised that the practice of the Continuity of Care Model varies from midwife to midwife. The researcher also noticed that many midwives from the community were keen to start the model but were apprehensive as they had not worked on the delivery suite. Moreover, midwives on the delivery suite who have not been in the community for a long time also felt apprehensive. The upskilling of midwives working in certain areas could become challenging as they have worked in one area only for a long time. The concept of caring for women is the same but the skills can be seen to be different. Hence, it would be interesting to conduct research into midwives’ perspectives on the Continuity of Care Model.

 

Example 4

There is a gap in understanding between the studies of employment relationships on the one hand, and employee rewards on the other. This gap is broadly manifested in two ways: firstly, by the absence of holistic approaches that seek to articulate the interactions between the employment relationship and employee reward systems. Secondly, by the differences in approach taken between these fields. These shall be considered in turn.

Conclusions

The conclusion section of our dissertation should effectively communicate the purpose, significance, findings, and implications of our research.

To write a clear and concise conclusion, a starting point would be to:

  • Summarise our research findings
  • Discuss the implications of our findings
  • Restate what the research set out to investigate
  • Highlight the key message you want to make

It is important to use clear and concise language when writing introductions and conclusions. We should also avoid using jargon or technical terms that our audience may not be familiar with, or we should explain these.

  • In conclusion, I have argued that...
  • The evidence presented in this dissertation suggests that...
  • The findings of this study have important implications for...
  • This dissertation has explored the following questions...
  • I hope that this dissertation has given you a better understanding of...
  • The findings of this study highlight...
  • This research contributes to the existing literature by...
  • These findings have important implications for...
  • Future research should further investigate/address...
  • The insights gained from this study can be applied to...
Example 1

This chapter begins by summarising the main findings from the study, advanced in the three empirical chapters. I also discuss some of the limitations of the study and provide suggestions for further research. Following this, I outline the contribution to knowledge this thesis makes. Finally, the thesis ends with some reflexive concludings. I intentionally choose to call these 'concludings' to reflect the idea that the knowledge co-constructed with the children, parents and staff of TPCC and my reflexive readings and re-presentations of the data are both partial and provisional, and therefore open to further reflection and discussion.

In Chapter 2 I argued that children's participation means different things, in different contexts. Whilst typologies of participation are a useful starting point for conceptualising the field, they fail to take account of children's participation in their different socio-spatial contexts. Consequently, a primary goal of this research was to understand what young children's participation means and looks like in the multidisciplinary context of an English children's centre. In this thesis I have argued that participation encompasses recognition of young children's agentic capacities in relation with other people, places and things. Yet, participation differs from agency in that it also carries a political element, in the sense of children negotiating with others, making decisions and/or influencing their situation. Hence, young children's participation is both procedural (in that it encompasses children's agentic action and embodied performance in space) and substantive (in that children participate in decision-making, citizenship practices, minor politics and democracy).

 

Example 2

This thesis has offered a comprehensive study of the way in which racisms have impinged upon and been generated by English football and football culture in both the more ‘traditional’ and more ‘modernised’ eras of the game in complex and linear ways. The thesis has also offered an evaluation of a series of national responses to racisms in the game under the period of study, with particular reference to the Football Task Force and the national Kick It Out campaign and its predeccessors. An evaluation of the extent to which professional football clubs nationally have engaged with the philsophy of anti-racism and with the more practical recommendations embodied in the Football Task Force and in the activities of the Kick It Out campaign form a central tenet of the empirical findings generated by this thesis.

More in-depth studies of two localised initiatives to combat racism and racialised exclusion in football in the North of England and the East Midlands offer a detailed account of the successes and difficulties engendered by work of this kind at the local level. This final chapter has identified a number of common themes that are present throughout the thesis with regard to popular conceptualisations of ‘race’, racism and anti-racism in British society, British sports and, more specifically, in English football and football culture. This final chapter has also cemented some of the key theoretical arguments and assertions made throughout the thesis in a clear and coherent manner. The consistency of these theoretical arguments and their rootedness in sociological understandings of the subject under study suggest that this thesis successfully offers an integrated and holistic evaluation of ‘Racisms and Anti-Racism in English Football’.

 

Example 3

There is a plethora of data that chronicles the underrepresentation of Black students in gifted and AP programs (Fraizer, 1995; Ford, 1996; 2006; 2010; Grantham, 2004; Moore, Ford, & Milner, 2005; Solorzano & Yosso, 2001; Tomlinson, 2002; Whiting, 2009) in our nation. However, very little data originates from the students themselves (Noguera, 2003, Thompson, 2002). This study provided high achieving Black students a platform in which they could share their experiences and perceptions about the barriers they perceive that prevent them from enrolling in gifted and AP classes. “This waste of human potential and talent must be rectified” (Whiting, G. 2009, p. 232). Findings from the interviews revealed significant factors that contributed to students’ reluctance to participate in gifted and AP programs to include lack of teacher encouragement, not fully understanding the benefits of the programs, fear of stress and failure, and not wanting to stand out from their peers.

 

My findings highlight that even if better identifying tools and tests were designed that resulted in a greater number of Black students sitting in the classrooms of gifted and AP programs, it will be in vain if we do not address the historical and systemic racism along with the long standing dominant ideology that has permeated our schools’ corridors

The results of this study suggested that in order to recruit and retain high achieving Black students in gifted and AP programs, educators, administrators, parents, and policy makers must be willing to look beyond the traditional means of identifying potential for gifted and AP programs and consider that Black students face unique challenges; challenges that with encouragement, training, and support of research based findings such as those used to guide this study, can be used to decrease the barriers many Black students perceive when considering these programs.

 

Example 4

The intent of this study was to improve instrumental music education instructional practice. To that end, conclusions from this study have implications for improving music teaching and learning. Consistent with definitions of creativity selected by participants in this study, winds and percussion instrumental music teachers should continue to provide students opportunities to perform repertoire and learn “classics” of the wind band literature. A quality music education should, however, include more than performing existing repertoire. Students should learn and perform new repertoire, improvise and compose music in the context of what they learned, and respond appropriately to both recreating and generating music.

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